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Feed the Deity

Supple skin

      female in appearance

and taste.

    Pink and verdant,
      her juices

                d
                r
                i
                p

in rivulets,
running the length.

My blade glistens with
      stickyessence.

Peeling back her slip,
    \v\i\v\i\d\ flesh

  entices my buds

and I can’t
    resist.

[taking a bite]

Sweet resin bursts
      within me and I relish

              this delicate fruit.



{Mangifera}

Author notes

“In real life I'm bone dry and when I play I'm a mango and in sex I'm starving to be a dripping mango”


-TORI AMOS

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Comments

  • lyrebird
    September 27

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    Wow.

    This is beautiful.

    I like the colour of the font as well... It makes me hungry.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    A beautiufl sensual poem nothing short of stunning


  • Loki silver member
    July 31, 2008
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    Well, you had me fooled till the end. Nice write and thanks for the entry.