Why?
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A contest entry
- Quickie by creationsfromheart.
465 points, ended July 31, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Why not?!
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common question
I've asked myself "Why," all the time to God. -
Sigh... I've asked that question myself so many times. The answer hasn't yet come!
Excellent! This says so much.. with just one simple word!
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blink blink.....
EXACTLY!!! you hit it right on the head
with this. I adore your mind and heart.
Love, Lane
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Thanks Sis, it's the first free verse I ever wrote that won gold.
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Profoundly asked -- you already know a lot of the answers to this question --
She-ra
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Oh My Word~
Yep- Heck this quite sums it up- Brilliant
and Love how You presented for much emotion
in three letters
Bravo!!
Love this and Youuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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dag i was gonna ask the same thing but thought it was dumb geez lmao and you won with it hehehe What i get for thinking it was dumb Good Job in winning lol
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hehe... sometimes simple is better.
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This is the one question I would ask!!! I came to this poem looking for this very long debate... hehehe The question suprized me and also it applies to not only me but so many others that I can easily see how we can all relate to this!
In your job I suppose you see so much more reason to ask that question!
Well done on the golden trophy!
Lovies
Becks
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Do you ever find that the shorter the poem the longer the comments from readers?
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Save for the enlightened minority, who may have a bit, more knowledge, I believe all of our questions will be answered after Christ comes to rule forever. Until then, our faith is to carry us through.
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This is powerful, Amera. Good choice of question. There is so much hurt and pain in this world and it's sometimes hard to understand why the world has so much pain and suffering in it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Wow Amera! How to say it all in one word! You never disappoint me when I read your work,and this is so profound.
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Brilliant in a minimalist way. You are saying what everyone is thinking. The question doesn't need to be any more narrowed down then this. Why not get the whole story all at once. This is courageous and fun. Have some bunnies.
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Only you could create such a feeling of intrique, with just one word. You placed both question and the possible answer in a manner so befitting. Could it be Will He Yield, When Heaven yawns, When Hearts Yearn
why o why o why.
Just pure genius as always. Best of luck.
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*cups his massive hands to his mouth and booms*
"Beeeeeee-CAUSSSSSSE!"
Paul
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Sis,
You said sooooooo very much with that one word! I have found myself asking that too... And about more subjects than I can name! And yes, you know the main one... Oh I wish I had that answer, He seems to have it, but yet I don't. Maybe during the rest of my days walking this Earth, I will find it, and if not, he had better have the answer on his lips when I get there! hehe... I need to know that one.
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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That one word spoke so much and all the questions I have for God ran through my mind as I read this. Excellent take on the prompt.
Love,
Tay
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answer why not?
are you Greater then the son of God not to endure any pains through life?
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I'm far from being that great so endurence is dificult. The prompt allowed one question only, so I asked a thousand questions with my one question.
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Amera I loved this honestly I did, but as we have faith in God
He already knows ouor questions before we ask them, therefor I think you have found the one word that would answer each of our questions if we were to say why? For he knows our needs before we d Love this.
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Best thing I've read all day.
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Bravo, and there is the simplest form of;
What do it all mean?
The only question that fits my search of a star filled night.
The answer is always the same;
Serene indifference to the question
and a general continuation of the process.
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Thank you; I thought this answer to the prompt was profound.
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