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Happy Birthday to You

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Birthdays come and go each year
but this one will be awesome
For you’ll rejoice with your dear
like a pretty flower in spring blossom.

Funny jokes and laughter will fill the air
Your soul-mate will initiate the birthday song
Crowd will sing along since they care
Feelings will overwhelm that you belong.

As you’ll blow-out the candles in one hiss
Round of applause will brighten up the party
A precious gift would be irresistible bliss
You’ll burst into blushes; hale and hearty.

Dancing with your other-half all night
Till two beams converge into one ray of light
I wish you many happy returns of the day
May God’s blessings shine upon you, I pray.

~~~*~~~

Author notes

Happy Birthday to you Hafsa…
Sabir, You both are looking smashing in the picture… Good luck to you in your future.

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  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    August 1, 2008
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    Very Sweet

    I liked your poem. Thank you for wishing us.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 31, 2008

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    Aww...this is a beautiful poem.....tender and sweet.
    It flows smoothly.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Harrisham Minhas