wispy tendrils of touch
tickle life's chord
licked by a shiver
consuming in decadence
naked fleshy desires
I am
eaten whole
by butterfly
maybe my second birth ?
Author notes
10 lines(no more then)
Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
This has to do with butterfly symbolism. Butterflies are believed to immortalize whoever they are drawn towards, or something like that, I forgot! LMAO
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Go ahead, kill it !!
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You did a wonderful job.. I really love this.. The imagery was really vivid and detailed.. you did a really good job with the prompt.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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thanks for your lovely comment!!
you've done really well here for ten lines. its really beautiful, and reading something like this:
"wispy tendrils of touch
tickle life's chord
licked by a shiver
consuming in decadence
naked fleshy desires"
is what keeps me writing poetry, because i know if i keep trying, one day i might be able to write like this!
it's inspiring
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Thanks, just a while ago I was telling someone on AP on how unispiring I feel !!
And you should read my "butterflies in my stomach" too if you ever get bored of life and have nothing better to do. It has no relation to this except for the title.
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ah i will do
p.s. you should have more golds
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So you giving me one?
LMAO only kidding!
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