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Through the fingerprints

through the fingerprints
against window-
cloudless blue sky

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  • marlene47 silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    I like the contrast of the smudged window (probably from waiting for the rain to stop) and the clear sky.
    marlene


  • notorious
    July 31, 2008

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    I love this one

    Along with the other one, the title of this should be "through the fingerprints". The title of a haiku is generally the first line, sometimes with brackets lik [].

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