Touch down spasms
Where does one belong?
Like a pure release of
verbal verbiage
inside of a song.
Touch down magic
how did I end up here?
This place is rocking,
and its so shocking;
where is my fear?
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Feel Free...
Comments
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This is really interesting.. The imagery was a maze for me Which I enjoy
.. you did a wonderful job. thanks much for sharing.. best of luck!
Angel
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well american football is in my head and i have not looked at the picture prompt at all so who knows - fifth down now


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hahaha
always bringing smiles, Ian, that you are and that you do, thanks lol
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I'm sorry maybe you should explain this in your AN. I am totally lost I got the first stanza though.....atleast, I think I did!
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How can one explain the unexplainable? hahaha its just what came to me when I saw the picture, please don't hold me accountable hahaha thanks lol
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Nah
but really what did you mean by fear?
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