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Who Knew?

Touch down spasms
Where does one belong?
Like a pure release of
verbal verbiage
inside of a song.

Touch down magic
how did I end up here?
This place is rocking,
and its so shocking;
where is my fear?

Author notes

Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic

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  • Angelflower
    August 2, 2008

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    This is really interesting.. The imagery was a maze for me Which I enjoy .. you did a wonderful job. thanks much for sharing.. best of luck!


    Angel


  • individuality gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    well american football is in my head and i have not looked at the picture prompt at all so who knows - fifth down now


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 1, 2008
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      hahahaalways bringing smiles, Ian, that you are and that you do, thanks lol


  • Fourthaxis
    July 31, 2008

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    I'm sorry maybe you should explain this in your AN. I am totally lost I got the first stanza though.....atleast, I think I did!

    • 2lullabyhaven
      July 31, 2008
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      How can one explain the unexplainable? hahaha its just what came to me when I saw the picture, please don't hold me accountable hahaha thanks lol

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