How can the most brilliant sheen
Compare to that of your radiance?
Like the day-blind stars who covet the sun
Allowing room for no other light
All other fires smothered with the dust
Kicked up from your awesome stride
Your eyes outshine the brightest colors
Emitting beauty that would make the streets of Heaven cry aloud
And when those eyes do shut,
The picture is such tranquility
It brings peace to the wildest things
Those eyes that quell the strongest storms
A picture of loveliness in a mortal frame
A face so untouched by the evils of this world
No cracks or scars do taint
And even if they could, each would seem perfection
And all else would follow suit, wearing your flaws like the finest silk
For nothing could ever make you less than an angel to me
Author notes
This is about pure envy...emphasis on the "pure."
I just spent a week with an amazing person who I'm silently falling for...yet I can't seem to wonder if I'm so in love with them or in love with the spirit and alluring joy that radiates from them with their every breath. It's amazing to be so head over heels for somebody so pure and magnificent. I'm drawn to them yet I'm completely jealous of their social charisma and spiritual grace...
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Ooh very nice; very expressive
Beautifully written
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