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Ten

This gets me flapping
I must attempt it, we'll see.
Such a hard call;
must 'x' it, is all.

I am kindly bidding time
whatever can I say?
this being very hard,
perplexing my day.

At last, this is ending...
ten lines I am sending.

A contest entry

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  • Melissa Burns
    August 1, 2008

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    Shows how much we're used to 'o' I didn't notice it there in the begining until I read someone's comment (the word 'you')


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 1, 2008
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      Yes, I couldn't believe I'd did that, but there it was hahaha Where can one purchase those 'sharp' pills? hahaha lol


  • mitchie
    August 1, 2008
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    this is good but u used o's and for this contest you can't


  • individuality gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, h ten line poetry - it is like asking van gogh to do just a fifth or whatever, a small section of a painting and then never bother with it again, i do not like the limits given with so many lines to contain. and while i am here lol i will tell you what else i do not like, fish in coffee sauce


    • 2lullabyhaven
      August 1, 2008
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      hahaha, I am with you on that coffee sauce hahhaa


    • Loki silver member
      July 31, 2008
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      Hi Individual, there is no limit on the number of lines that can be used in this contest. Putting limits on word usage only goes to exercise the writers imagination. The reason I made a limit of at least 10 lines is to ensure that I would not have entries that were two lines only. I like to give props to everyone who has the mental capacity to attempt my contests.

      Perhaps you would like to try your hand.

      BTW, coffee is not a sauce, it's a drink.

      • individuality gold member
        July 31, 2008
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        ah right at elast ten lines, i diod not look in the contest page i just went by the ten liens etc so my mistake there, i agree with you, poetry should not be limited to so many lines thanks ah no, i will no longer enter contests but you can be sure i have many poems that hit the topic already posted though then again maybe not now as i removed a lot recently. still i have poems lol


  • Loki silver member
    July 31, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry and good luck.

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