Anorexic skinny does not bode well with me,
as I myself seem so small in this world.
My wish is for your skin to be smooth,
and you shiver at my lighter than air touch.
So, in a world of chaos I will be your calming draft,
to set high in your dreams of laughter and love;
I will be there for you. If you are there for me.
Author notes
10 lines(no more then)
Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
Have fun be creative and unique..
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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Oh!! This is so very beautiful!! I really loved it! you did such a wonderful job with this piece!! the imagery and flow are just breath taking.. You did such a wonderful job... I've been struck speechless!! thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck!!
Angel
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Wow, you'd say all that to a butterfly?
"and you shiver at my lighter than air touch."
I didn't get this
... I think you meant something else!
"in a world of chaos I will be your calming draft,"
Awesomest line!!
Good luck with this!
Anansey
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