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Butterfly Kisses

A soft, warm movement of air that touches your skin…
small eruptions of excitement as you feel my breath glide
over your naked flesh.
A light touch… lips, settling on your neck…

You lie there, eyes closed, enjoying the sensations…
enclosed in a world of pleasure and warm sensation.

My tongue traces a butterfly trail downwards… the many
colors of pleasure and passion float in your mind as you feel
the soft touches, the light probing that tantalize your imagination.

The dark buds of your breast feel the warm enclosing of moist
lips… the light pulling as they are tasted… the stream of sensations
that flow through you.

A moment’s rest and then you feel the soft winged journey continue…
ever lower, across your stomach…

Pauses as I taste your essence stoke a growing heat, a growing
need, a growing anticipation…

Like a blossom, you open and I finally land, to drink your nectar, to fulfill
the promises made...
                  …by butterfly kisses.


Author notes

DQ if you must... I couldn't stop at 10. Okay – a bit obvious (LOL) but that doesn’t make it any the less sensual…
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
No more than 10 lines

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  • wildfiredreamer
    August 2, 2008
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    This is sensual and so very sweet, I am glad you placed.


  • Angelflower
    August 2, 2008

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    Ok.. so who gives a flying freak if this is past ten lines!?! this is really wonderful.. Its so soft and beautiful and so gentle! I really loved this! thank you very much for sharing! best of luck!

    Angel


  • Angelflower
    August 2, 2008
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    Lol.. Is this it?


  • Fourthaxis
    July 31, 2008

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    LMAO I thought you were done I forgot there were 0 lines !!