Enchantment's finest
fairy-tales pulchritudinous
love given unconstrained
Who deserves to stimulate
even one soft petal
restraining beggar
permitted such saintliness
Author notes
To the bottom feeders it all seems imaginary
like stardust fins weren't meant to touch" - from Aquarium by Cerulean
A contest entry
- it's a quickie 10-20-20 by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended July 31, 2008, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow, easy to understand your getting silver here. very nice realistic.
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Wow
I likey lol
I love you
Kels
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Congrats on the deserved trophy! This is a lovely short poem!
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congrats on the silver baby
this write is quite pulchritudinous!!!
i love you!!!
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I like the 'feel' of this piece. It has a definite allure lol congrats on the Silver
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HOLY SMOKES! All these incredible writes. I didn't get mine done on time...but that works out. I wouldn't have placed anyways. Look how wonderful this is...I'm just wondering what Gold must be like after this...
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"pulchritudinous"
What the hell kind of word is that? It's like swallowing 20 pills at once (haven't tried this & do not recommend). Cool though, for you (presumably) udnerstanding it.
That first stanza is awesome..."restraining beggar/permitted such saintliness"<--I LOVE that
Nice Silver
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I can't read that. *highlights*
Oh its good.
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LMFAO, you are so amusing
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Well I will be dern!
You know this is the first time i won in any of your contest and you want to stop me now!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much okay your an angel instead!
sss
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