Finally home at last I grab a book head out back
lay down on the ground to read
Nice warm sun, my eyes soon close
as my thoughts drift to thee
I dream of you I always do
I long for you gentle touch upon my skin
today everything seems so real,
On my tummy I feel your fleeting touch
that can't be you're not here
I opened my eyes to see a butterfly had landed on me
Author notes
sorry if this isn't good, not what I had on my mind before school. But I came home to my kitty dieing, I promised I would post after school so here it is.
When I was in grade school and high school I use to go lay in the yard when I got home and read.
Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awww this is really good actually
I really enjoyed it.. though I'm sorry that your kitty died.. 
you did a wonderful job.. thank you very much for sharing.. I really enjoyed reading this.. and the childhood iamgery as well best of luck!
Angel
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very sensual and sweet. Lots of imagery and subtle tones to it...I really like this. Says a lot without saying a lot
beautiful! best of luck to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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