~Stomach~
Smooth as a butterfly's wings
~Erotic~
Soft to the finger's touch
~Gentle~
Her body's curves are perfect
~Fragile~
Making sure I never hurt her
~Hunger~
I crave her passion and desire
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Credit: Butterfly_Tempting_by_shraphic
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Angelflower.
600 points, ended August 2, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh.. well this was sensual and yet soft as well.. Slightly heated and emotionally satisfying.. I really enjoyed this.. thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..
Angel
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Wellnow, you are turning it up here, aint ya?
This is sooooooo much better than obvious or explicit. Soft, sensual, and just the right amount of indirect heat...a little slow boil type thing....?LOL
Wow Jer, this is fabulous.
~Gentle~
Her body's curves are perfect
~Fragile~
Making sure I never hurt her
~Hunger~
I crave her passion and desire
Love,
jin
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craving her passion and desire! Your soft and sensual words are so smooth my cuz!
Lovely poem! ~Sie
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"Soft to the finger's touch" = nice line
"Gentle~
Her body's curves are perfect"
I somehow felt this needed something more here
though I lreally liked the structure of this!
Anansey
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I crave her passion and desire....
hmmmmmmm....great take on the prompt hun.
was the pic your only inspiration for this piece?
Best of luck in the contest
Tasha
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