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who you are

its not who you are  to the world
its about who you are to me
it is not how often I say i love you
but how much i really do
hopefully these words will sink
deep down you heart
and realize that i truly do
adore you and love you to

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  • Soft-Rain
    July 31, 2008

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    Beautiful! This poem has a certain peice of your heart placed carefully in it! Simple and very touching!
    The first two lines make a strong impact..


    its not who you are to the world
    its about who you are to me

    Shouldn't this always be so?
    Hugs
    ~Lisa~


    • theburninglegend silver member
      July 31, 2008
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      hu? lol

      haha, thank you my friend, you have touched me for the night, well I always bring my heart on the table for others to see, and sometimes I hide behind the mask to forget that I ever exis. But thanks to people like you who have taught me to learn from my mistakes turn the bad feelings into a good feelings,


      ***hugs***
      thelegend