co-existence cannot continue
when we consume the flesh of
others
one step closer to the total
annihilation of all or the
creation of those who eat
people
when one is left, no one will
survive
Author notes
prompt:
quote from A. Einstein
A contest entry
- Quote Inspired. [Albert Einstein] by Naridill.
300 points, ended August 7, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I felt the last two lines could have been dropped - they just added nothing except a small drag onto the end.
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thanks
it is only an anomoly . . unless the last one eats himself . . didn't want to be gross . . don't know if that is a drag or not . .
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Excellent take on the prompt.
How true!
'when one is left, no one will
survive'
Finally they destroy themselves too.
Wonderful.
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beautiful. this is fabulous as usual!
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Excellent
Wonderful creation for the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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