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Miss U

Talk to me, you don't,
For what have I done?
I look and see that you've already won.
I miss you,
See you in my dreams.
Think of horrible things that could have happened,
Because you wont say anything.
Whats going on, what could it be,
That for all your doing is ignoring me.

Made you upset,
Is that the debt?

Please tell me,
Let me know,
For if you don't,
Upset I shall be,
And sure to go.

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This i9s to someone who, not saying the name, should know who he is. i annoy the heck out of him. I just hope he will comment. just maybe.....

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  • TartarusBorn
    August 7, 2008

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    nice but i think you could work on it to get more emotion and connection across...maybe some context may help

    keep it up