face the light that shines through
take the time to look at the view
watch the world just glide by
as you sit and hide inside
when you look through your window what do you see?
hope desire love the sea?
when i open my window i see the world
swirled altogether in one big mess
A contest entry
- Open Your Windows by ea.
500 points, ended July 31, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thanx people xx
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you poems quickly! lol good poem!
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wow very good and i agree with the last line 2
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wow, a surprising final last line but not one I can disagree with! I do get a sense of facing the light of your computer window as much as a possible window in a home here. Thank you.
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