To err is human.
There is hardly anybody
Has not done any mistake in life.
But it should not recur,
Specially due to negligence,
Or Lack of control on oneself.
When a mistake is done repeatedly
It no longer remains a mistake,
It becomes a crime.
Those who want to correct themselves
But fail initially can also be pardoned.
But they should have intense desire
Not to repeat the same.
Otherwise any person must face
The result for the damage caused.
The more is the damage
Harsher will be the effect.
So the less the mistake the better it is.
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A contest entry
- Mistakes by XHollowXEyesX.
600 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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wow, I love it. It is so different to all the other peoms that I am reading in this contest. You dont just talk about one specific mistake made, but all the ones that humans make and the conscious thought that goes into making these mistakes. This is awesome and very thought-provoking.The only thing that I could say to improve it a little is editing the last line, the word 'is' doesnt seem to fit, maybe replacing it with 'the'. but it is up to you. awesome write.
Thanks for entering.
All the best
~hollow~
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