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words like you do all golden and sudden....

words like you
              do
                all golden and sudden
sunny side up on the plate
a hangnail
or fate
      we flutter we plunder we procreate
like humming birds
do...
    ...we drop dew drops like
                              they do
                                    on
                                  flowers
          (oomph!)ahh(ooooh!)
too bright for you my dear?
        or
  the little smiles
  you drive through
      like
kamikaze bluebells that
      bow
      and
      bow
      and
  wow( ! )wow
      bees
torching the fields with
                        fuzzy little knees
              your navel
              crunching my (please!)
    again & again
i say
you say
too much

    as 
      my
        thunderhead
            sheepishly
                  storm clouds your
            maidenhead
        through
      a
brick
wall
of pollen that's so sweetly
    swept up the dawn
in snapdragons and chewing gum
            (pop)
      caught adrift in the
humdrumdoldrums & the PLUMP stinging
ring
that
    my lips leave
                as they
           
    apa(press)rt
      your lips

you quiver like a bowstring

    this arrow sings
      quicksilver 
        & to the
          po!nt
            .











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  • BermudaHighway
    August 2, 2008

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    Sexy, appropriately urgent and addled. This is vivid without seeming crude, which is rare and admirable of lustful poetry.

    • owsleybeck
      August 5, 2008
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      why thank you. I entered it for a contest. One of the suggestions was to write an ee cummings like poem and as he is one of my favorites and i enjoy trying to do ee knock offs for fun sometimes i thought meh...what the heck.