Such innocent imagination
exploring hidden talents,
with deepest concentration
to understand this world so new.
Swirls of inner magic
drawn in great delight,
centre of the universe
focussed with such feeling.
Fairies in the garden
butterfly on the wing,
this tapestry of childish whirls
the outpouring of inner reflection.
View this world of naivety
and remember grace of purity,
with hope that stormy waters
will never sully these trusting hues.
Author notes
Option #3
A contest entry
- The Prompt Coffee House: Prompt Challenge Round 1: Picture Prompts by Ceridwens Soul.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A lovely insight into the fantasies of a child's mind. Great use of the prompt.
'Swirls of inner magic
drawn in great delight,
centre of the universe
focussed with such feeling.'
A beautiful piece of imagery,well written.
Thank you for sharing with us
Jem and Ju
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Thank you for your entry, good luck!
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