I belong,
where windmills turn
with musical winds,
and the stars
are almost touchable.
I'm destined
to float,
eternally,
in our beautifully small
corner of the universe,
waiting for you.
Author notes
Prompt- http://i37.tinypic.com/auxlaf.jpg 
30 Words
I hope you like it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie! Interesting image! by retribusive.
523 points, ended August 4, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any good?
Comments
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a beautiful write!
where windmills turn
with musical winds,
and the stars
are almost touchable.
very touching and beautiful choice of words! i loved this! very well done! x
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This was beautiful ; I don't know what else to say.......
Your descriptions were simply equisite. Im looking forward to reading more of your works now
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I love the sense of gentle sadness in this poem I was going to choose one line that I liked most, but i actually loved it all. Great writing.
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this is a cool poem!!! congrats on the gold trophy!!!! -slick99 Have A Nice Day.
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Very elegantly written. I'll admit...it left me wishing it was I whom you awaited.
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Thanks for the entry. Very nice work! I love your word choice and simplicity.
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