Every women has her
past, present & future;
yet only she may know
what is hidden beneath
shadow's calling forms.
Tricks are often played,
as people come and go;
but only those who remain
will see her grow into a lady.
Doubtful onlookers swift on by
because her soul does not call,
and only when she chooses the time
will you see her true form of light -
are you willing to play along?
Author notes
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Secret Reflection by manips-of-artist2
I have to say the picture (prompt) looked playful to me....*shrugs* well this is what I say...might add more....*thinking*
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 10 by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"past, present & future"
Ooh, I like all 3 girls represent something different in time...
"shadow's calling forms."
I love that.
You use 'call' in the third stanza after using 'calling' in the first stanza...maybe change one of them for more variation in words.
Good luck
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Yes, we all have that inner playful side I think! And hope others will play along! A unique and excellent take!!
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An excellent take on the picture. It does have a playful feel to it, I saw it as dark at first but then everything I see is dark at first..lol. Let me know if you add more. A great read, thanks for entering and good luck
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A very interesting take on the picture!!! I pondered what I would have written for it myself but my mind didn't travel in this direction so I say well done to you mate!!! Best wishes....
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