Chansen is my little star
Although he may be far,
I know he's always there,
He is one guy that is rare.
After all the long 5 years
I never have anything to fear
As he is the only one,
For me he is 2nd to none.
Forever will he be in my heart.
And hoping we will never part.
As with out him I wouldn't be,
The way he makes me feel as I smile with glee.
His cute little smile,
Can be seen from miles.
And although we have been through a lot,
Now things just right on the dot.
After all the hurt and blame,
looking back it all seems so tame.
I will love him till the end
He is more than just my best friend.
The times I have battled to be with you
I'm not sure how we got through
But I'm so happy we did,
Because it could have parted us heaven forbid
So for you I wrote this,
As I blow you a kiss.
Forever I will love you,
As I know you love me too.
I will be here till the end,
And I hope it's a lifetime we spend.
As I look back and think how crazy it's been,
You will always have my soul within.
I love you with everything I have Chansen.
Author notes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EXEfg4-9BnY This is the song to go with the poem.
A contest entry
- I Can't Think Straight Without You. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended August 9, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Your poem is full of sweet and tender feelings that I felt very strongly as I read.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Love Margaret
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amazing poem. Good luck in my contest. Thanks for entering!
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Its so refreshing to see love blossom like this,
This i know is from the heart, and words from the heart to me out-weigh words that are written in a beautiful format.
Love how it ends too...
"So for you I wrote this,
As I blow you a kiss.
Forever I will love you,
As I know you love me too."
All the best
Ken
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very very nice work. good luck
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Thank you for your beautiful submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Oh Wow you do have it bad!
Oh Wow you do have it bad!
Ahhh now then this is how you feel about Miladdo eh!! (Teasing grin!).
I see your poetry has vastly improved and this is brilliant Karlie, you are rhyming and flowing far better and I reckon someone might just be encouraging that! Bet he was chuffed to read this... os has he yet?! (Grin).
Well done love the descriptives and the poetic graphics too, and wow for online love eh! Well done write on ... stay with it! Love it!
Poetic Love & Hugs & Loads of pats on the back!
Mum!
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