You feel like you want to cry,
But you have no idea why.
Your emotions run strong,
As everything just feels wrong.
As the day goes slow,
And all you feel is woe.
You just want to feel cheery again,
As everything feels down the drain.
Happiness seems so far away,
Like missing a lovely summers day.
Day goes slowly into night,
You wish you felt alright.
Night goes to morning,
The sun is so adoring.
Once again you are happy,
No longer horribly snappy!
Emotions are funny things,
Always pulling on your heart strings!
No one can ever ignore them
Oh what a gem!
Copyright 2008 Karlie67
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This is a gem indeed, gonna check out some more of your writes
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Mmmm I can relate to this one!
Mmmm I can relate to this one! Yep been there done that worn the T shirt and been on the receiving end of it too! Bravo for this masterpiece too, brilliant rhyme and flow and fabulous on poetic graphics and the rhyming couplets style, this is brilliant, do more like this, and love the well chosen and used descriptives and straight from the heart expressionism, fantastic work! Well done, love it bravo!
Poetic Love & Hugs & Loads of pats on the back!
Mum!
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