Love is spring's eternal song
Love is a smile that will never seem wrong
Love is a kiss of sensual joy
Love is a time to be less coy
Love is forgiving a wrong that was done
Love is for light and for saying your the one
Love is you and all the things that you do
Love is when you say , I will marry you.
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Comments
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A really nice write. I like the repetition of the first line.
Good luck!
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Loved the repetition of this. It worked very well.
Did you mean "spring's eternal song" on the first line?
Enjoyed how you ended the poem, very cute. -
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Thank you. You know I never spotted that. I will change it.
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perfect
i love love love this poem -
Good love is poem.
My favorite line:
Love is forgiving a wrong that was done -
aw.
timeless and charming.
lovely write!
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Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Nice definition of love. Nice rhyme and flow as well. thank you for entering
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welcome to All Poetry
This is a very beautiful write that outline what love is. you have captured it with imagination and as if you have yourself personally had the experience of knowing what love is. I love the use of rhyme here and how each line flows together beautifully, like a liquid lol. a wonderful and powerful write well done and best of luck to you in the contest
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This poem had lovely rhyme and flow to it, I enjoyed reading it so much, it had that carefree aura around it that love is supposed to have.
Afew suggestions I'd like to make
instead of writing this:
Love is forgiving a wrong that was done
Love is for light and all things that are right
You may want to change it as it disturbs the flow alittle and knocks the rhyme so maybe if you changed it to:
Love is forgiving a wrong that was done
Love is for light and When I whisper your the one
See it flows better apart from that this is wonderful,
Welcome to Allpoetry.
Brienna
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Love is
Thank you for your comment. The more I read it the more I think you are right about the sixth line. You are really quite good at this.
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