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Growing Up

Who is that in the looking glass
Staring back at me
I just don't recognize her
Can't believe what I see

Is that my image that I see
Have I grown up so tall
Whatever happened to the little girl
That was me when I was small

I can't believe I'm all grown up
I am a young lady now
I'll have to remember to be adult
Can I do it? Holy cow!

I think that I shall always be
Just a kid at heart
I still like doing childish things
But I'll try to make a new start

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Secret Reflection by manips-of-artist2

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  • PianoMan
    August 2, 2008

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    I don't ever want to grow up either. I hope that I stay like the person in this poem. Great job!

    I think that I shall always be
    Just a kid at heart.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    Ahh yes, I think a lot of us are kids at heart!
    But we must move on and make a new start as adults often! A lovely poem for the picture! Thank you.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    The poem is inspired by the picture so it should be credited And a stunning poem, the rhyme is fantastic as is the flow. I think we all have a child in us somewhere, I know I do. Beautifully penned, thank you so much for entering, good luck


  • QuietPort
    July 31, 2008

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    This has a really sweet and innocent feel I thought it was cute
    Good Luck!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 31, 2008
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    Hi, please credit artist in you AN, thanks.


    • Katie Lazette
      July 31, 2008
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      I didn't use the picture with my poem, so I didn't think I had to credit the artist in the AN box.


  • Ken-Maverick
    July 31, 2008

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    This is so sweet
    It reminds us that there's always the child within,
    Holy Cow, i almost forgot how old i was too
    "I can't believe I'm all grown up
    I am a young lady now
    I'll have to remember to be adult
    Can I do it? Holy cow!"
    This is funny. lol

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