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Memories

I sit here thinking,

of my past

just wishing

it would last

 

but like everything

once its done

you cant change it

the time is gone

it will never

come back again

so ill write to u know

of how i felt then

 

I loved you deeply,

and you know who you are,

well, who you were

and then you were my star

 

I couldnt wait,

to wake up,

just so we could talk

enjoy a few hours with you

you made my life tolerable

I was and am now

the definition of a misanthrope,

for a little while

you changed that

and I thank you for it

because it was great at the time,

but now it just strenghtens

my harsh judgement upon all of humanity

 

 

I love and despise you

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My life is one without direction, standing on a dangerous edge, smart enough to cause emense amounts of harm, but to stupid to mend what I have broken

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  • Lady Mak
    December 9, 2008

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    A beautiful write dear poet...so full of emotion I can feel it in my heart...beautifully written


  • Moon Dancer
    August 2, 2008

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    Well I'll tell ya sumtin you got me speechless... I really don't know wat to say really. This has strong emotion in it. I LOVED it. And muh first impression is Wow Alot of emotion!!!!