I looked into yours eyes and immediately new.
You were either the best that ever happened to me or the worst,
thoughts came to mind.
A perfect man with hidden secrets.
I fell in love.
Life was great as time went by,
decided he was the best, not the worst.
Death arrived and he was gone.
I died, too.
My life stopped that day and the pain never ends.
My mistake was falling in love........
He was the worst thing that happened to me.
He took my life with him.
I never should have fallen in love.
A contest entry
- Mistakes by XHollowXEyesX.
600 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
wow this is an awesome write. The impact that it had by keeping it short and not rambling on about the love you felt for him, made it so much more enjoyable to read. Awesome sense of flow and use of language.
Thanks for entering
All the best
~Hollow~
Adding your comment:
