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My Hero


Kissing you is a chore,
makes my knees bloody sore.


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  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: My Hero
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: Kissing you is a chore-
    had to chuckle at that for I was imagining phrase: chivarly is dead- and seeing how it can work the joints- bruise up the knees and this is wild but seeing knights lined up for some healing potion an old hag had concocted from a toad-- whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt in ten words ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~



  • piccola gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    not what the artist wanted to convey I'm almost certain! (smiles) good rhyme though. Doesn't someone do a song about knees and mother brown?