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"How could they guess that I was standing there enjoying an unexpected moment of insanity?"

a beautiful illusion
his voice furious, perfect, velvet whispers in my ear
I thought I was forgetting,I am more then grateful
maybe its wish fullfilment from my subconicous mind
or my life prone idoicy that holds the key to my insanity
but the hallucinations never cease to appease me
even if it is false fabricated evidence he might care
the only disappointment now comes from the fading of my new found comfort
so foolishly, but on purpose
I test the boundries of my broken promise
risking my very existance
hoping to keep him here with me
even if only for a moment longer

Author notes

I orginally did this based off of a qoute from New moon, but then it turned into something more. but as you can tell this about how bella starts hearing edwards voice anytime she was in danger and for some reason when i read the book and everytime i read it im so drawn to that part.

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  • SingMeToSleep
    March 3

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    Wow. I loved this! I think this is an excellent characterization of Bella during New Moon. Great write!

    Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    September 22, 2008

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    Yes that part in the book is very intersting. Wonderful descriptions, great write.


  • Number 13
    August 20, 2008

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    Ohh yes. Yay New Moon and Bella XD
    This is beautiful, most definitely reminds me of things Bella would say :]


  • Falling in Loveless
    August 9, 2008
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    love it~! good job. a remarcably good subject with a good interpretation


  • Walls-within
    August 3, 2008

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    Lol I love this. It sounds like something bella would say all the way. Great jo with this, and good luck in the contest.


    • Silent Emotions
      August 4, 2008
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      it took me forever to write this cuz i wanted it to be perfect, lol. thank you for such a nice comment.


  • Missa
    July 31, 2008

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    awww this sounds so much like bella. i can wait until tomorrow and the midnight release of Breaking Dawn!!!


  • Candy Morphine
    July 31, 2008

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    oh awsum!!
    -cant wait till sat for new book

    i love this.
    as i was reading it i thought it sounded a lot like twilight series


    • Silent Emotions
      July 31, 2008
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      it took me forever to write this, i wanted to be perfect becase it was for the twilight series.

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