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Paint the Town Red

Chainsaws and bathtubs, baby
Chainsaws and bathtubs
Who's fault is it?
Who unleashed me on this world?
I wish someone could warn them
Because they have no idea
People are going to die tonight
Hopping fences
Crossing yards
They'll never take me out
in a cop-car
They can't slow me down

Apartment buildings
Doors kicked in
Gas-station parking lots
Became battle grounds
That's where your kids are tonight

They arrived at the scene
A moment too late
To get a description
Tape-measures
Blood-splatter
They said, like a puff of smoke
I was gone

Hungry and tired
Eating food
Eating drugs
Growing fat
I'll run it all off tonight

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  • taintedsunshine
    August 1, 2008

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    Woah i really like this.Its really raw and it paints a picture in my head as I read. I liked the 1st line alot :Chainsaws and bathtubs,baby. It has a rock n roll feel about it. Keep writing stuff like this.