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Not anymore

I Cant take your shit anymore
The way you treat me like a whore
i thought i loved you
i guess i was wrong
to figure it out--
it took too long

Is this lame?

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008

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    i dont think this poem is lame,
    i think that it is sooo true,
    it does take a long time to figure out the true person,
    keep up the writing
    ɛiɜ ~Amy


  • Mistress Masquerade
    July 31, 2008

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    It's not lame, I get how soemone can totally use you and you accpet it because you think you love them but.. You realize you don't and it just sucks. great write.