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drama in the grass



field mouse scurrying
grass snake gulping
scratch one mouse



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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 12
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    lol funny

    poor mouse had no chance with snakes preying, thank you for this entry
    MM


  • poetrandy
    September 18, 2008
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    Hood-Wink

    Nice little Modern Haiku. This one has "real" action in it!


  • Age of Rain
    August 15, 2008
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    YES! What a great 'ahah!' moment.


  • PatheticKt
    August 11, 2008

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    Lol, the last line had a great purpose to the other lines; poor field mouse, though
    Quite an adorable haiku, all right ^^


  • Death of the Author
    August 9, 2008
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    Haha!!!

    This genuinely made me laugh


  • onerios13
    July 31, 2008
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    LOL.

    This 'ku is almost as adorable as that pic.

    • ecrivain01
      January 11
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      I hope ...

      your holiday season was fabulous. Haven't heard from you for a while, but hopefully all is well in your world.

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