I am the flower of the spring season opening, fields
You are the sting bees craving fingers for my yield.
You can suck my nectar with all freedom in hue’s
Don’t be the moon, melody or the blood and mew.
Be a Christmas carol in muse but don’t break me.
Jack/off\ all-master: Not me walk away proceed.
I am the sun afire at dawn you the dispersing dew.
Flower to a few pleasure for all who know me.
Author notes
I am Jai from India, love nature, poetry and fast bikes.
Around fifty six years.In business live a relaxed life.
Make virtual friends if they too love poetry.
Am fragile like the flower, and bee's love me.
lol
I am scared of real ones in real life.
A contest entry
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Does this flower have a PUNCH.
Comments
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What a beautiful write, a great entry for this contest. A perfectly penned write with great flow and good imagery. Thank you for the entry. Keep the pen flowing...the pleasure was all mine.
Nevadapoet
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An.. Interesting write. It is very creative as many have said. I'm not quite sure how it fits my prompt except for the last line... It's a stretch but a good write nonetheless. Good Job!!
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Very creative and original. I enjoyed it though I'm not sure how it fits the prompt of my contest. Thank you for your entry.
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lol
To be a flower is to forgive even those who break them.
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this is a nice write, the imagery is interesting and you ended it well
thank you for your entry,
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lost love YES
thanks.
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not exactly what i was thinking but still good and does fit the pic i will give you that it does give it a lighter touch i do like it
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"I am the flower of the spring season opening, fields
You are the sting bees craving fingers for my yield."
The Begonia is a beautiful plant! There's some fine imagery in this and clever word choices. Excellent penning poet!
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