I'm addicted to it.
I love the lies.
The little lines you fed me for so long.
Words, and nothing more.
Yet.....I need it.
I live off it.
And now it's gone
And I'm lost.
There's nothing to fuel my pain.
There's nothing to spark my insanity.
I'm becoming normal without you.
Well...that is when you look past the new red lines.
But, they're nothing more than side effects.
Side effects of the void.
They fill the empty chambers left in your wake.
It's time for me to visit my little red friends again.
They'll comfort me now that you're not here.
I think I'm going to sit back.
Sit and let the acrid smoke fill my lungs.
Fill me up and slowly asphyxiate me,
So, cheers!
Let's tip the bottles and waste away into the sunset, love.
thank you for the pain. like i need more
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this has evoked some not so pleasant memories, but i dont mind =] and perhaps maybe im still addicted to those lies...
a great way to convey an emotional prison...and perhaps u can stay away from those red lines by bleeding words next time =]
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beautifully depressing! this is from the heart and its fantastic. great write
Sincerely,
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wow
great write i dont cut but i do know about tiping the bottles back
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Well - I hate the subject
There's never a reason for extreme... but beyond that, it's a wonderfully wrought poem... It's clear and the emotions and images are tangible... You share the pain in way that helps the reader understand what and why... Excellent (for the cutting, drinking, doping type of works 
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Ken
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very good
Very good read. Perhaps a bit dark but I'm not one to talk and certainly life is just as dark if not darker... its crazy sometimes how much putting your thoughts down and your pain and experiances can help you reflect and see things clearer. Its also nice to read poems from other people appearing to be going through a lot of conflict in there life. I'm new to the sight and have found it suprising the amount of similar minded people you find just browsing for a few minutes. Feel free to comment my first poem I posted here a couple days ago, feedback would be appreciated anyways again I enjoyed this good job keep it up =) -ry
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