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Wait for me

I might be a blonde
Maybe a ditz
At times I'm a klutz
But one thing I'm not
Is a fool
So don't doubt
I know when you lie
And I'll know if you cheat
Just talk
And I'll know
The truth's in your eyes
And the words that you speak
Just believe in me baby
Dissapoint I will not
Our love is so strong
Just please don't you cheat
We'll make it my king.

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Long distance relationships.. suck!

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  • darkened light
    August 8, 2008

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    Hm. Much agreed. Excellent poem though. Lots of truth and emotion in this poem. I like it mucho.

    Great poem.


  • Bluebattosai
    August 1, 2008

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    nice the pleading makes the poem flow so well.
    you tell the person how well you know them like this line

    'The truth's in your eyes
    And the words that you speak'

    its just wonderful
    good job.


  • at-a-crossroads
    July 31, 2008

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    Its very good

    when i red the title it wasnt what i was expecting but it was better. unbelievable writing and very good job. my life is basically all that. but with a girl.lol. ive been cheated on alot so ive almost given up on relationships and its refreshing to me to find a poem like this