Hard times, bad luck,
rampant indecision
a victim of my naiveté
this patch is woven tight
shaded gray
Bright strands,
gold and silver
mingle here
dispel the overwhelming blue
Sun and vivid flowers
make a splash
of brilliance,
Overcome by black
deepest purple, too
weaving in and out,
The toll time demands
for passage.
Life’s tapestry
woven with joys
and deep regrets.
A contest entry
- Tapestry ( PIF) by Freed by Mercy.
900 points, ended August 16, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How, I can visualize this patchwork tapestry/collage.
Great use of imagery and metaphor in this piece!
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What a beautiful piece on the woven tapestry of life! You did a most incredible job on the prompt....Best wishes
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Bravo... wonderfully woven (no pun intended
) with colorful imagery... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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