The ember of the fire embellishes the past.
So, I知 judging everything.
My obstinateness to the odious thought of destroying myself in vain keepsakes the beats of my heart.
(I知 repellant to your rejection; I知 tied to your tension.)
The scolding of my repentance mounts me above the ground.
Unfortunately, my practice was never preached.
The ignorance of bliss shadowed the reflection.
(I know you値l never love me.)
Passionately embracing the value of what pain could be worth-
Competing among the tripod of father, son and holy ghost .
My only religion didn稚 believe in me.
(I値l never have faith in us.)
The true and the beloved is now the corruption.
With surety it didn稚 hurt enough.
Come against me my love.
(Make it hurt.)
Hayley McDaniel
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Wow. This is powerfully forward and clear in intention, the pain and desire seems very clear in the words. The choice of words themselves are very effective.
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wow, this is amazin, i like how you describe everythin with detail but then in simpler words you sum it up, i like all the lines, simply amazin
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