have you experienced love yet,
it causes a lot of pain and tears, that you can bet,
it can also be a wonderful feeling,
but 2 people both need to have 1 thing,
patiences, thats all you need,
because you have to let your love grow like a seed,
if you rush something is bound to go wrong,
and your relationship wont last very long,
love is not all about charm and lust,
its truly about loyalty and trust,
when youre in love you think about a person all the time,
theyre your soul mate, even your partner in crime,
if you see them, or even hear their name you get filled with joy,
you can feel like this whether youre a girl or boy,
every time youre with them you never want to let them go,
you just wish time stood still and went very slow,
love makes you want to stay with them till the end,
and theyre not only your lover but also your best friend...
Author notes
How does being in love make you feel?,
A contest entry
- how do you feel by musicalangel1449.
500 points, ended August 6, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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I really liked this, I know what loves feels like and this pretty much sums it up!
great work with this and thanks for entering. -
Being in love makes me feel...
Despair, the longing for something i want but cant have
"when youre in love you think about a person all the time,
theyre your soul mate, even your partner in crime,"
So true are these words
Enjoyed the read
Ken
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WOW
This is a poem which really does pit love to the post, cos its very true of love, and the way the poem ryhmes superbly throughout the poem makes even better, the last line just completes it perfectly
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very right
love is very much like that. It made me feel like i was reading the guide lines to love and how to make it work. And believe me, love is a lot like that...lots of work..but it's all worth the effort to make this turn out great! Thanks for entering! love the poem!
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