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Epidemic Lust

Expound the animation of the flesh of the fruit:
the morsel of the apple,
the puncture from the serpent -
adulterates the soul of the domain.

Humane flesh dispenses from the soul,
wriggles absent from the rib:
love’s hand influences humanity-
love’s disbursement fractures lucidity.

The supremacy of hate conducts the ocean-
the ocean segregates only for one.
love is: drowning in the deepest sea-
throttle holding into the domination of one’s serenity.

Hayley McDaniel

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 31, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Wow! This is deep. Well done with this write, makes one think beyond the surface. Good rhyming. The ending, perfect for the train of thought.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.


  • Ken-Maverick
    July 31, 2008

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    "The supremacy of hate conducts the ocean-
    the ocean segregates only for one.
    love is: drowning in the deepest sea-
    throttle holding into the domination of one’s serenity."
    I love these lines
    Enjoyed the read
    Ken