What would make me okay
In front of your eyes
Beauty isn't just skin deep anymore
I can change
I'll correct the defects
This body will be decorated in a new outline
[Bridge]
Flashing my crooked smile
How do you like the new
and improved me?
[Chorus]
Hold me under
and cut away my empty
I just want it to show
How I feel about you
Going under the sharp blade of your knife
Stripping pieces of my life away
Replace the pain
With something numb
I've been reborn
Into shiny, cold, hard new plastic
[Bridge]
[Chorus 2x]
Author notes
How does being in love make you feel
A contest entry
- how do you feel by musicalangel1449.
500 points, ended August 6, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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ah i am under the bridge drinking cider whilst thinking of my love, and the chorus sweeps me into defiance - all the water sounds like your vopice, there ripples question my desire, and i scream, and i shout, and i feel and i doubt that you were ever here, my dear, i love you, but all this blue colour just sens me insane.
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oh wow. being in love must be very deep for you. I feel pain in this but then your love this love...but something happened in your love that stopped you. I hope that's what your trying to say. Sometimes im not good at understanding poems!lol...very good tho. thanks for entering!
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