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Life of variety

Red for love,
And burning strong.
Black for Hate,
It burns so long.

Blue for sadness,
Inside my soul.
Crimson blood,
For heartbreaks toll.

White for pure,
From any of the wise.
Gold for Careless,
I couldn't be demised.

Silver lining,
Just for you.
I did what said,
You wanted me to.

Holding candle,
And burning flame.
Extinguished,
By the pouring Rain.

Red for love,
And burning strong.
Black for Hate,
It burns so long.

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  • Topaze
    August 12, 2008
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    Very well done, and it has a real nice rhythm to it. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest.