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We know

We all know
You're words are fake
So come on
And just give us a break
We are
Tired of it
You are guilty
And its time to submit
Your words
Are flawed
But your prosistance
I applaud
Because its been a while
Since you have been real
There is not anymore
Time to conceal
What you have been
Trying so hard to hide
Beacause now our words
Are starting to collide
And I'm afraid to say
But your time is done
I hope your betrayal
Was for you great fun

Because I'm out
Of words, of time
This is over
My heart is nolonger prime

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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    July 31, 2008
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    verygoood.
    whos it about?


  • Stripes
    July 30, 2008
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    Great poem..wow!

    oh my this is absolutely wonderful...well not the situation but the way it was written, the message comes along deep, but i admire the simplicity in your choice of words of delivering this message of betrayal and fakeness of the person you are writing about. great poem!