Gay
A nervous look
A dirty thought
A quick prayer that
I won’t get caught
A loving kiss
A lustful touch
A star to wish
It wasn’t such
A tell-tale look
A binding trust
A promise to
Do what I must
A friendship lost
A waste of time
A sorrow knowing
It’s a crime.
02/04/2008
Author notes
An old one.
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Wow...this really makes one rethink what they may have thought before. The rhyme works really well, and it is just so true. Great job on this one as well.
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this makes me sad...
i wish it wasnt true, but its too true, especially in the type of culture i come from....
well written.
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Very thought provoking, and has already been stated, the rhyme works effectively. This is quite poignant and asks questions of identity. Nice and profound, thanks for sharing.
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Cor!
This is beautifully ryhmed and many thoughts put in to this poem
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you've written this so nicely..giving out your deep thoughts..
Keep penning!!!
Lieu
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Very vivid
Nice job
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