The succubus enters
inside your room
removes the darkness
displaces the gloom.
Fantastical dreams in spectacular scales
in your head she fulfills
your wildest dreams.
You dream it is I with such skills.
This is her mastery
mistress of the dream realm;
so get ready, imagine,
let her take the helm...
Author notes
As a woman writing to make a male contest holder BLUSH!!! ;P (contest "make me blush") ~~~ Here is a guy who would never cheat on his wife. He dreams it is she being so intimatly creative and arousing so in his mind he's not sleeping with another. But the Incubus and Succubus are dream demons who give such adult dreams to those with pentup "adult" frusterations. Such feelings draws them to their "prey".
A contest entry
- Now You Make Me Blush, Won gold in comp from Penman and am passing it on, winner please PIF 300 points by Topaze.
450 points, ended August 12, 2008, 15 entries
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615 points, ended May 26, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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1200 points, ended July 8, 14 entries
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Comments
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nice ideas, stunningly written
I liked it. freud eat your heart out
thanks for entering good luck.
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Here is a guy who would never cheat on his wife. He dreams it is she being so intimatly creative and arousing so in his mind he's not sleeping with another. But the Incubus and Succubus are dream demons who give such adult dreams to those with pentup "adult" frusterations. Such feelings draws them to their "prey".
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Wow! Not many can do a clean poem with that subject! Welcome to the contest!
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Nicely done, succubi do have a way
of causing many a man to blush and then some.
Best of luck to you.
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Vert well done indeed, I shall give in I am at your mercy sweet poet. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest. Blush!
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