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It reminds me

The power and passion.
The love and carefreeness.
I love every song and every note.
A Rocket To The Moon,
They seem to know what there talkin' bout,
If just from the name.
With songs that remind me of my girlfriend from begining to end like Baby We're invincible does.
I love every moment of ever beat.
It fills you with hope,
And no need for the past to repeat.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 22, 2008

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    I do not think I have heard of them but I shall listen to them now
    Excellent poem


    Thank You for your entry in Children's Contest: For Children 13-15
    & Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    Co-Judge


  • xXmimi...crunkXx
    July 31, 2008
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    Adam, the song Baby We're Invincible is by A Rocket To the Moon xD


  • LionessK silver member
    July 31, 2008

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    Good luck in the contest!

    Music is wonderful... and quite an inspiration. I love the emotion felt in lyrics and notes... as in your poem.
    Thank you for sharing this, you have a great piece here.


    ~Kristy

  • Shadow Darkstar
    July 31, 2008
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    Isn't it so wonderful how songs can remind you of so many things, and you can just get lost in them? This is a good poem, it flows well and the title is something I wouldn't have expected for this prompt. I'm glad you entered. I wish you luck in the contest.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    Very well penned There is certainly no mistaking what band you like and why.
    Thanks so much for your very positive piece and entry into our contest
    gaylene


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 30, 2008

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    I like this poem alot, despite aafew spelling errors that i noticed like:
    begining>> beginning
    talkin>> talking
    apart from them minor spelling mistakes I enjoyed this write alot, it has very nice rhyme and shows your passion for music.

    All my love, best of luck in the contest,
    Kitty xxx

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