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Make Merry The Heart

The dance of words
inclined to inspire.
Melodius undertaking,
sigh, sigh, sigh.

Humble impressions
joyful renditions;
glitter the night,
with dazzling ilk.

Highlighted moments
of shrewd mood teases.
Fit for a King,
or imps, within reason.

Joyful platitudes,
arranged to impress.
Entire ringtones
competing at their best.

Author notes

Music moves from the inside out -- This option is let 'music' be your prompt.

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  • individuality gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    a good piece that swerves the spirit into new ideals, let the music of this crazy old world spin us all dizzy.


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 31, 2008

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    I love the metaphor you've used in combination of music and the poet. It was a fun read. I'd have to say my favorite part is:

    "Highlighted moments
    of shrewd mood teases.
    Fit for a King,
    or imps, within reason."

    You have so much style within the four stanza, it really makes this a terrific poem. Very well done.

    Thanks for entering the option contest ~ It was my pleasure to read your work, as well as give a review.

    Best of luck to you,
    Florida Sunshine

    P.S. I like the background...