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An Extended Metaphor

My brain is a raindrop on dead leaf.
It provides no nourishment, and it's useless.
Dripping down its shaft in September,
my brain reverses:
guided by gravity as it heads to its inevitable absorption
where it will remain in grounds of the school classroom
trying to grow a tree.
And when its leaves wilt in early summer
without sufficient water,
my brain will go through evaporation
and rain down in June
on another dead leaf.

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  • Miss Shadow
    November 21, 2009
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    stunningly beautiful.


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 15, 2009

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    This was very good. Full of imagery. I enjoyed reading this. It was well done. Thanks so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest.


  • Rhythm Child
    October 1, 2009
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    The idea of the contest was the poem must have won a trophy before.
    you have me at a bit of a loss cus i really like this poem