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Dark Haiku #15

As crimson tides bleed
Tomorrow becomes today
Dark yesterdays fade


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Kinda just wrote it on the spot, hope its okay...

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  • individuality gold member
    May 27

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    and they say tomorrow never comes, but it always fades as it slips into today, then waits in limbo ofr another attempt to claim, a good poem.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    For on the spot it is stunning, I bet you don't even use a syllable counter do you? I agree with pastel, darkness suit you well and this is no exception. Deep air of mystery surrounds your words here. Awesome read


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    A very well penned Haiku
    and how true are your words
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Darkness becomes you.
    This is delicious!
    I love it!
    Good luck!
    ~Pastel


  • Dangerousparable silver member
    July 30, 2008
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    Hurts

    I feel your anguish


  • miranda2288
    July 30, 2008
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    I love this. Good choice of words

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