this summer ive been through a lot,
it all began with this stupid little plot,
i did something stupid and i paid for it,
but ive actually learned from all this dumb shit,
ive learned to be strong and not to let anything get to me,
because in the end, only you can make yourself happy,
i gave my heart to the wrong person,
and this summer i was really hurtin,
but im good now and i wont make that mistake anymore,
now people just have to work really hard to open my heart door,
i think i grew up a lot this summer,
but while i was becoming smarter, some people became dumber,
now im not giving anyone any breaks,
just because i learn from my mistakes...
Author notes
i wrote this from my experiences in the summer of 2007...
A contest entry
- Mistakes by XHollowXEyesX.
600 points, ended August 19, 2008, 23 entries
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wow you involved so much emotion and use of descriptive language in such a short write. I can feel the anger you feel when reading about the past summer.but awesome moral to the story..kinda,,the part about learning from your mistakes, not the one about giving up on love and trust.
awesome write
Thanks for entering
All the best
~Hollow~ -
Ooh, harsh. It's good to grow, but not necessarily to stop trusting...
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